Waking up early in the morning wasn't a great way
to start off a day, but it wasn't just any day. Today would be my first day of
high school. I was finally going to be done with middle school, and its drama
for the rest of my life. As I ate breakfast, put my uniform on, and got ready
for school my sister kept telling me, "This is weird! We are both in high
school now!" It was weird; I am growing up and becoming a high school
student.
As I was in the car with my sister, I was asking
where is English, and where is Geometry Honors, trying to figure out where each
of my classes are. It was going to be a whole new world. I've never really been
in the high school buildings besides the foreign language, because it’s the
same as middle school. My sister was telling me about the teachers, and how
their class is. I was excited to see for myself how I would like it.
When the bell rang for the first class I was happy to see who was in my
classes, and how high school is different from middle school. I found a few
differences throughout my day. One, is that you start off from where you picked
up. One the first day, I had received a spiral, homework, and homework schedule
for the cycle. Another difference I found was the freedom. I don't have to have
a little pass to go to the nurse, I can leave lunch when I'm done, and I have
more time to do work or hang out with my friends. I loved it! Even though it
was the first day, I could already tell I would love high school way better
than middle school. I couldn't wait to see how the year would turn out!
I was so ready to be in High school too! This was really well written, and I agree in most of everything you said! Happy we are in the same English class Claud!
ReplyDeleteI love the way you detailed your morning to where I felt like I was with you. I feel the same way about Highschool!
ReplyDeleteClaudia, I like how you include details of your experience that make it memorable. Think about what sensory details you could add to make it more vivid. It's not that you need to expand every single thing, but think about what happens when you replace words like "breakfast" and "car" with more specific sensory words. These posts all reflect good thinking and writing.
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